100-Word Story: You’ll Be Fine

PHOTO PROMPT © Fatima Fakier Deria

GENRE: One line of fiction. The rest is truth.
100 words

Dedicated to my dear cousin Mary Veazey, who said, “Let’s go on a cruise.”
I have almost forgiven her.

POETIC JUSTICE or, YOU’LL BE FINE

 

Beautiful . . . waves, sunset . . .

Deck chairs . . .

Two nights at sea, then—shopping in Can Cún.

Uh-uh. Swimming, sunbathing, siestas. Bar open yet?

#

Soooooo relaxing. Waves rocked me to sleep.

Hurry, let’s claim our chairs.

Breakfast?

Chairs. There’s pizza near the pool.

#

I’m queasy.

Wearing your patch?

Don’t have one.

Sit here. Sea air helps. ‘Bye.

#

Find a doctor.

You’ll be fine.

Move, or I’ll ruin your sneakers.

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I’m going home . . .

You’ve had a shot of phenergan—you’ll be fine.

. . . if I have to swim.

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Phenergan worked! I’m fine. Let’s shop till we drop.

. . . I’m queasy.

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18 thoughts on “100-Word Story: You’ll Be Fine

      1. I know what you mean by the memory lingering. Even today, over thirty years later, I remember my experience as if it happened yesterday. I wrote a poem about it, and you’ve inspired me to post it on my blog. You’ll get a pingback when that happens.

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  1. You must admit, you have sense been on several more cruises with much happier results. Then, there is always the chance…..when do we leave again? mvz

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